OMGTWWFTW: Week 2

Its excellent!
Keep it coming!

Agree 1000% on the dance. Makes you as quirky as Ellen.

And as...erm...blonde.

I agree with Jesse 110% percent. The cuts are jagged when splicing pieces together too which completely interrupts the flow. But I must say, the dancing bit was fantastic. Keep working to make this bit evolve, and garner all the laughter it is worthy of.

I feel as though you have very good comedic timing, you pause at the right times to let something sink it, but its being destroyed by constant interruptions.

Ready for the shit sandwich?

Your presentation, authority and tone are good.

I'd rather see more visual puns then people laughing in the background. Like when you talk about Bobby Kotik twirling his mustache, drawing a mustache on him.

Some of the crowd's reactions slow you down and make the cuts weird. I'd rather this be shorter and strung together better. What makes Yahtzee's videos good is that he doesn't WAIT for some reaction, he HATES you and glances over the fact that he digresses.

People in the background are "dude not cool." and at this point you might as well get a laugh track, cause at any of the points I thought were funny someone made an unfunny comment that promptly made me want to stab myself in the forehead.

I like your story and writing style.

-This has been a Jess comment.

So glad footage of Luke dancing was in there!

Ellen is, indeed, quirky.

OMG.... LOVE THIS SHOW!

Hilarious.